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Teen Poetry #4

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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-27 03:59 AM

He's gone.
Will I see him again?
He made a promise.
Will he keep it?

Tomorrow I will see him
Maybe, Hopefully
Tomorrow will be better
Maybe, Hopefully

Five long months.
He's strong...?
He promised me.
He'll be ok...?

Tomorrow I will see him
Maybe, Hopefully
Tomorrow will be better
Maybe, Hopefully

not my best but its not meant to be

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-27 01:32 PM

Five months is a long time... but hang in there, time can't hurt you.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-04-27 03:35 PM

Time is our friend, time is our friend, time is our friend, time is our friend...ok maybe if you repeat that enough, it'll work....heh or not but sure. You said what you wanted to in this very well, g'job.

~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-27 09:23 PM

Wonderful job....I hope all goes well. Hang in there!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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