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Celebi
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 17

0 posted 2001-04-22 08:32 PM

Its not fair.
Lifes not fair.
I hate when people say that...
Even when its true

I wish that saying was never made up

Because lifes not fair...
And I dont need the truth

The Truth Hurts

~Celebi~

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

1 posted 2001-04-22 09:05 PM

i think the truth may hurt but needs to be heard... tis my opinion

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-22 11:24 PM

Things could be worse...
But they could be a lot better!

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
-

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-23 01:31 AM

The second thought was an interesting one indeed... I don't need the truth, because the truth hurts. Yes, it certainly can. I'll agree with you.
And sometimes, we don't need the truth.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

4 posted 2001-04-23 08:49 AM

oh wow, i really really like this one! So much within so little.
I hope everything looks up for you..

take care, and keep posting!

(btw, i hate that saying too!!!

)

*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.*

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2001-04-23 08:55 AM

I really like this poem. It is all too true. Great read!

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-23 11:27 AM

I enjoyed this.. it's a little short, maybe too short. Maybe you could expand on this idea a little?
Just a suggestion..
Nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-04-24 03:50 PM

Yea, but it's there and the saying exists for a reason. Anyhow...nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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