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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-04-22 02:58 PM

(this be one of my more weird poems likes i had to do it for school it kinda amuzes me knowz its not that great but yeah i had fun writing it

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How I like my mustard
Even I relish it on my custard
People think I am crazy
Maybe it's because I'm lazy

I must admit I am not smart
But please do have a heart
I am sensitive about that
I do not like to chat

My hair is blue
I do not have any shoes
I am a weird species
That lives in BC

I am a human being
Who is seeing
Many things in a different way
So what are you planing to say

So! I am not the same
Try to sue me this is my game
Play by my set of rules
By using my tools

I am hidding in my shadows
I feel rather shallow
No one need to tell me I know
WE ARE ALL LIKE THAT NOW GO!

I guess in that way I am like everyone
Now my story is almost done
I will be on my way...
For that my friends is, all i have to say

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

1 posted 2001-04-22 03:51 PM

oh wow scarlet you were awesome always werent you i loveds this poem hun *hugs* it is kinda cute but it has a meaning to it to i really like it in fact it has inspired me to write a poem so i will put it up soon ok thank you hun i love you

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2001-04-22 06:15 PM

Sweet. Reminds me of the things i write for school...hehe.

Just remember; being strange is being interesting!

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-04-22 06:44 PM

For some reason, I found this to be a very relaxing read

I liked it a lot. First one of yours I've read I think. Keep sharing and thanks for the wonderful read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-23 12:56 PM

I enjoyed this poem....found it to be quite weird hehe but i liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-23 12:58 PM

I love how you rhymed BC with species. I thought that was brilliant.

Excellent job, this was obviously fun to read.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-23 03:15 PM

Heh.. it's always fun writing poems like these. It's fun reading them too

Thanks for the read.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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