ramblings of the lonely man

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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-04-19 11:35 PM

i wait
i look
i sit here wondering
wether or not you will return
and if so
do i still matter
will you think of me
while you out in the real world
wut is real
is it real cuz others say it is
or cuz it isnt where i live
i feel left out
alone and cold and tired and odd
this isnt right
you leave
will you return
if so then will i matter
do i matter now
i think
i feel
i......i dont know
wut am i doing
where am i going
i feel like i am losing my arm
my leg
or maybe a large chunk of my belly
which has been the only friend i used to have
nowi have them
and you and you and you and you
and then i feel closed off
from a world your entering
like i may not go there
and you do not want me there
and maybe you dont or maybe you do
oh well
i will wait
and see wut happends
i will cry while your away
i will miss you
i would say good bye or farwell
but i wont
all i will say
is "till next time, cya soon, and later"
these are just crazy ramblings i needed to get out sorry ppl lol

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

1 posted 2001-04-19 11:42 PM

heyz that was a cool poem i thinks i have a poem likes that somewhere not on here but i will have to post it. i feel that way too likes i'm on the outside looking it. don't worry ur not just feels that way. in some wayz we r all alone. cuz we r born alone and we will leave the world alone. but we still have people who care.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-04-19 11:54 PM

god i love this poem..i really do!i guess we all feel like that MOST of the time. i hate feeling uncertain about anything.it makes me feel incomplete...i guess thats what i felt by reading your poem. thanx for sharing!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-20 02:05 AM

I thought this was great. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Very well done.
I liked the line with...and you and you and you.....
I liked the effect it gave off.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2001-04-20 09:45 AM

*whispers to ben* is that scarlet up there? *points*........if it is scarlet

then *jumps on scarlet* hey sexay welcome to passions!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ben did u write that last nite? bcuz it fits edith leaving

*hugs* it will be ok baby. she will come back to us. its only 3 months. she needs this time to herself. did she tell u about the convo she had with john the other nite?

i love this poem. it is so much a part of u. reading it it feels like u wrung out ur emotions and just put them there for all to see. and i agree. "and you and you and you and you" u made me feel like i am one of those 'you's and u drew the reader inside.

lol u just pmed me and we are talkin so wuts the point of sayin nething else here? :P
i love you *licks*

<~~~eek *hides**is afraid ofclowns*

5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

5 posted 2001-04-20 10:54 AM

awww,ben was that for me? cause if it was *cries* awww..ima miss you very much and everyone else.. and I wont forget about I promise. I will only be gone for 3 months.. so its all gravy..and while Im going i can get online every once in awhile and chat.. I PROMISE!!(that was a promise.. rarely ever get those from peeker) I WONT FORGET YOU!! *hugs*

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

6 posted 2001-04-20 11:05 AM

awwwwwww *sniff*

edith hurry backs to us

and u best be talkin to me when u can gets on u dork butt (not pork......DORK)

*LICKS* slurp:P heh
*hugs too scarlet, edith, and my ben*
love you 3!!!!!

tiff

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-04-20 01:29 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. Lots of questions.. and few answers. I've been there! I liked this a lot, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you soon

Nicely done here.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-20 07:55 PM

Wow.

  People are coming into PIP in cliques now...
Just wow...
Oh and the poem?  Nice job.   Hope all gets well.
Geez... so many people.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

cheerleader_gal4life
New Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 6

9 posted 2001-05-17 08:55 PM

That was very good Ben. So wow a poem written to Peekieloop? I wish someone would write a poem about me. *tears* It's ok though. Very nice though. Where did she go anyway? You are a great person so she won't forget about you. What about Jonny? He is a great person. Jonny if you see this Salutations

. Well ok this is long enough. God Bless,
Cherish

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

10 posted 2001-05-17 09:29 PM

great poem ben!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-05-22 09:45 AM

Just don't think too much of it. All it's gonna do is drive you crazy and just make you feel sad. It's good to ask these questions once in a while, just don't let it consume your whole attention.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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