Teen Poetry #4 |
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Because you were there |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Because you were there you stood by me and i stood strong you wiped away my tears that had been there for so long you came in and gave me a new start now you've got it, you've got my heart i give thanks to God for sending you to me you've helped me be all that i can be you've given me your love and your care thank you for always being there |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like someone's just fallen ![]() he he he Seriously, nice to see people in pip, happy thanks for sharing loved the poem "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
It's nice to see the smiles of the day. Nice dedication to whoever it is. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Nice..i like this nice rhyme to it and a beautifyl style. The person i loved the most has left me, now all i got are u guys here. Thanks for the support. |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
Really, really, liked this and I hope to see some more awsome works soon "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like i like...very cute..and im sure whoever ya wrote it for is awsome...(obviously) good read! ~*KiMmIe*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Heavens Tears![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww. I really enjoyed this one. Keep it up. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sweet. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It's a nice tribute to your friend. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
awww sweet. Good luck with everything! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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