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Jess714
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 10

0 posted 2001-04-18 06:21 PM

She is a sweet flower
Who blooms in the day
Brings joy to all around
She is one who never dies
For everyone thinks she is sweet.

Willing to help
When people need help
She is always there
Right by your side

As sweet as she may sound
She is really this sweet
Everyone loves this wonderful lady
Because she brings joy to all around her

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-04-18 06:25 PM

I'd like to know who actually you are describing in this poem. Is it a friend, a sister, your mom? Seems like you really look up to her. Wonderful post. I loved each line I read. Thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Jess714
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 10

2 posted 2001-04-18 06:36 PM

This poem is about my teacher.... she is a great person.... but also this is dedicated to my sister RAchel

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-18 10:25 PM

Man, I wish I had teachers that could inspire this sort of stuff. Did you give your teacher this poem? Just curious.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-19 02:41 AM

I enjoyed this poem a lot. Very well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-04-19 09:48 AM

i've had very few teachers in my life that could inspire me like this and that i could feel this way about. cherish the time that you have with her and learnas much from her as you possibly can. great job on this, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-19 09:52 AM

Very nicely done. This is a very sweet tribute to your teacher. Those kind of teachers are hard to find nowadays. Nicely done, here.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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