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Jess714 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 10 |
Mangos and strawberries could never be like you on the lake For you are soft, sweet, and innocent just like on the lake You aren't like the rest You aren't fake Mangos and strawberries take no remorse For they listen and take the course For they are the horse on the force They don't know how to take the worst Unlike you who takes the pain to no extreme [This message has been edited by Jess714 (edited 04-18-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions Jess! I enjoyed this very much. I found this read to be quite interesting. I hope to see you post more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
  Welcome!  Great first post and I'm excited to read more. Check your e-mail for a special message. Hope you enjoy it here! *dq -=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=- [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
welcome to passions (seems like alot of ppl have joined tongiht) neways i liked the poem, it was cute, and it was written well <3 *~KiM~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
 Welcome to Passions! This is a very good first post. I enjoyed reading this, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Oh, and there's a spelling error in the title. You're and Your is always a commonly misspelled word. Anyway, I know you'll like it here  Welcome!--Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. [This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-18-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome to Passions!!! Im so glad you decided to join us!! This was a very interesting and intruiging first piece! I cant wait to see more from you |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! i really enjoyed this poem, you have a really interesting style and i am really looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. i'm glad you've decided to join us, i know you'll like it here Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i adore mango an strawberries...yum this was a great first post. I hope to see more from you. Welcome! Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Mmmm..... yummy. I really like the comparison you created in this poem, very creative. Welcome to Passions in Poetry! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
Welcome! I really liked this and I hope ro see some more post soon...........yum, strawberries "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
Hey Sis! You know I love that poem and I told you to keep writing them! Kepp up the GREAT work! I love ya! Love Ya Sis!! Rachel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Glad to see you've joined us here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy reading and sharing as well "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to Passions! Your poem was good, you used an interesting topic. Keep posting! *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
Welcome and enjoy!!! This poem was nice. Nuff said. sabriel |
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