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Cruise Missile.
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Cruise Missile. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Cruise Missile. Bridging an empty gulf, A missile in the air, Threatening to engulf, Up everyone I care. Cruise missile on it’s way to war, Deathly silence we’ve survived this all before. Another allied invasion, All over this black gold, It’s just large scale tax evasion, They haggle over the price it’s sold. Cruise missile on it’s way to war, We’ve seen the violence and survived before. We live here in this poverty, The conditions here are dire, The people here are cold and hungry, Don’t have fuel here for the fire. Cruise missile on it’s way to war, Death’s arriving on our front door. --- Sorry once again to Linc... I didn't mean to steal your catchphrase honest... Will i be poked with sharp sticks or might you deem me worthy enough to live? <<<_ Andrew _>>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
This poem was really cool. Good Job. sabriel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
He'll forgive ya. I liked this lots...the flow was a bit iffy but neverdalesh, enjoyable.  ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Veddy, veddy interesting...had my attention the whole time. (which is a hard thing to do in case ya didn't know) "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
great post. i'll agree that the flow was off in some spots, but still really good. everything is skin deep |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it.....thought it was fine. Not my fav, but I enjoyed the read. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Crusie Missile? Hmm, you won points on creativity, that's for sure... Interesting ideas...let's hope our Bush doesn't decide to go barking up that tree again... Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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