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I need ( love again ) |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Heal my hurts – ease my pain The rusty door wont open Say the words – hide my shame Unchain my heart again Help me close my eyes Help me get my feet back on the ground Just help me through this lonely night Please save me – from the sadness The heartaches wont stop I can’t breathe – to much emptiness Between us can’t give up help me the glow's gone help my flame has been blown out just help me don't wanna be all alone I need to hold your hand because I’m so scared I need the memories that we once shared To feel love again I need you here right now to make me feel whole I need a kiss to help my soul To feel love again |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Wow, i really liked this one a lot. i can totally relate to everyting you have said in this poem. great job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow...i havent posted in a wicked long time...neways...i like this really sweet... *KiM "i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well hi there  hey this is a good poem it gave me a good look at how u write and well keep it up i really like how u write*Tears of love* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I ejoyed the formet within the poem. I also liked what it had to say. very well done on this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Powerful emotions. I know exactly how you feel... Great poem ~Nikki~ |
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