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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2001-04-14 01:15 PM

Thief.

I’m what’s left, the filtrate,
An ostentascious overlord,
In to their homes I infiltrate,
I take what I can’t afford,
I mastermind my own schemes,
I’m a modern Robin hood,
I steal peoples hopes and dreams,
I live down by Old Sherwood,
I aqquire my possessions,
To furnish my taste,
It’s become an obsession,
And much goes to waste,
I’ve never been caught,
But there is a price on my head,
With dangers I’m fraught,
But I’m always one step ahead.

Andrew.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-04-14 02:25 PM

wow this was awesome~went together very well. cant wait to see more. keep it up

*dq

-=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=-

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-14 02:59 PM

"ostentascious" how am i suppose to know what that means. (pout)lol.

it was great i got everything else, the whole Robinhood thing fit very well in this poem.
great work!

Regina

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-14 07:42 PM

LOL @ Regina

This was good, Zu. Very interesting theme.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-15 01:13 AM

This was fine....felt that the last line had more syllables than the rest of the poem. I liked the poem thought. Not yer best....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-15 09:14 AM

I'll agree and say that this one isn't your best... but still a fine job, Andrew. Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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