Don't Wanna (My final Goodbye to Justin)

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-04-13 06:28 AM

I don’t wanna see you,
I don’t wanna hear you.
I don’t wanna smell you,
I don’t wanna feel you.

I wanna forget you,
I wanna forget I loved you.
I wanna forget you exist,
I wanna forget all about you.

I don’t wanna know you,
I don’t wanna love you.
I don’t wanna think of you,
I don’t wanna dream of you.

I want you outta my life,
I wanna say goodbye.
I don’t wanna cry,
I just wanna say goodbye.

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 04-13-2001).]

Linc

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The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-04-13 07:53 AM

Nice...nuff said

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-13 10:28 AM

YAY! You're saying goodbye for good? I'm so proud... Hehe.
This is very nicely written, Tamma, and I'm glad that you have that strength to say goodbye.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

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Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-13 11:06 AM

Pretty good... but I think the title was a bit immature.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

4 posted 2001-04-13 12:14 PM

saying goodbye is a really hard thing to do, i'm glad you've found the strength and the courage to make that decision. great poem.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

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Bay City, MI

5 posted 2001-04-13 12:20 PM

hi there tamma....straight out my Anaylsis... its great but why the final goodbye....Whey not the first and never the last. well i really like this poem and it has a lot of heart like so many and im sorry its the "final goodbye" and not the "first" but pick yourself up......You always gots me.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-04-13 12:20 PM

Hey,
Good job on the poem Tamma!

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Dopey Dope

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7 posted 2001-04-13 02:05 PM

Well said!

Heavens Tears

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8 posted 2001-04-13 02:50 PM

It takes strength to say goodbye. I'm glad you have found that strength.

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keoni
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Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-04-13 03:02 PM

That's definately a final goodbye. I wish I knew how you do it. When someone has meant so much to me in my life I can't say goodbye for good, even though I should sometimes. Good poem.

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
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Child of the Stars

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Ann Arbor, MI

10 posted 2001-04-13 04:18 PM

*whines* Idowannnnnaaaaa!! Waaahhhhhh
.........Nice poem.

~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

Acies

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Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-04-13 06:20 PM

I'm just glad I'm ot Justin

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Jenn Cirrincione

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12 posted 2001-04-13 06:28 PM

Wow. It's hard to say good bye sometimes. I'm glad you're strong enough.

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

Dark Enchantress
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meet Morgana

13 posted 2001-04-13 08:05 PM

Goodbyes make us strong, so don't stay down my dear. Don't regret, don't cry, don't feel weak... look up at the sky and take a deep breath. The reason we say goodbye is because something better is meant to find us.

As for your poem, I think it was very good. Very clear and meaningful.

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anonymous albert ?

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14 posted 2001-04-14 12:49 PM

nice job

Ina
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Quebec, Canada

15 posted 2001-04-14 11:06 AM

huh?im still really confused. well this was a great ppoem Tamma. Hope all is well.

Regina

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