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shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

0 posted 2001-04-12 12:52 PM

Like the stars a-glimmer
in the midnight skies,
are the twinkles a-shimmer
in the depths of your eyes.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-04-12 12:54 PM

Hey,

This is a great poem, short and sweet. Keep it up
-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 04-12-2001).]

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-04-12 01:02 PM

I really like this. in very few words you wrote a really powerful poem. keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-12 05:25 PM

Well done! I liked this a lot! Short and good

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-13 10:40 AM

This was pretty sweet! Shorts like this belong at Hallmark.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-13 10:44 AM

Heh, Allan.. this is a very Hallmark-y poem.
Nice job, very sweet

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

6 posted 2001-04-15 10:32 PM

hehe you guys are right..it would make a perfect card!!! hehe..but very cute..and quite simple!!
*KIM*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

7 posted 2001-04-16 02:32 AM

i liked that one a lot...it was really cute especially with the "a-gliimmer" and "a-shimmer"..did i get em right?
cute!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

8 posted 2001-04-16 10:03 AM

Short and sweet, very cool.
Keep on posting.
Andrew

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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