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Explaination |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I thought I had my life back, to where I wanted it to be. The world revolved around everyone, instead of a time warp around me. I had Justin back beside me, but not loving me like he did, I had this thing that made me happy, something that compelled me to live. I had the best friends in the world, who were always there for me, atleast I thought they were there, and I thought they always would be. Well, they got me into trouble, and got 58 pictures taken away, and this whole fight never would've happened, if they would've gotten them back yesterday. They say I owe them an explanation, but I don't know what they want me to explain, they lied to me and they yelled to much, and it put my heart in pain. And now I see that 2 of my friends, weren't really friends at all, I thought they would always pick me up, but then they let me fall. But I've got all of you all here, and you all are my friends too, and in closing this I want to say, I love each and every one of you. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice poem Alyssa. I hope things go better with your friends. Try to work something out with them though, friends are one of the most important things in the world, in my opinion. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I really hope the situation gets better, i know exactly how you feel in this one. *hugs all around* Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I also hope things get better for you and your friends  this is a great poem never the less even of the topic isn't great until your next poem-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks Linc, you're awesome. ANways, things are working out!!!!!!!!! Slowly, but shurly!!!!!!!!!! Anyways, a wise person once said "it takes a strong person to admit they're wrong, but an even stronger one to say I'm sorry." And I did it!!!!!!! I didnt have faith in myself, but I did it!!!!!!!!! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done Allysa! Nice to know that things are going great!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"But I've got all of you all here, and you all are my friends too, and in closing this I want to say, I love each and every one of you" I guess this is how we all look at pip We love you too Allysa "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*Hugs* I'm sorry that the situation sucks right now.. but that quote you said is so true. Very nice poem, it's well written. I hope things get better... --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job, Allysa! I did like this poem, the scheme and format were just simple enough to let the message shine through. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice poem "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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