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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-11 07:06 PM

Our last Goodbyes

Our last goodbyes,
to the winter , so long.
When we could've
played all day or sang a song.

Our last goodbyes,
to the lovers we leave.
You were never sorry,
For you lied, cheated, and you deceived.

Our last goodbyes,
to the world we end.
I will live forever in your heart,
For you were always, my loving friend.

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

1 posted 2001-04-11 07:11 PM

I hope everything goes fine, I really enjoyed your poem.

"Eat, drink and be merry for tomorrow you die."

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-11 07:46 PM

wow! this was amazing. the power it was so expressive.

REgina
library pppiece

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-11 10:18 PM

Great job on this! I liked the theme.

~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-12 03:58 AM

Weird how you say that this person lied, cheated and deceived, yet still you claim to be a friend and so on. Some friend you got there!

Doesn't sound healthy to me......assess that situation a bit more before you consider being friends. ANyway the poem was done fine. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-04-12 10:42 AM

I agree with Dopey. You can't have friends that do that to you, all it does is end up hurting you more and more and more and... Oh, I liked the poem alot, that part just kind of threw me.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2001-04-12 12:26 PM

I liked this poem, it was oneof my favorites from you. i won't tell you anything about choosing your friends, i've had my share of friends that have done all those things to me.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

7 posted 2001-04-12 01:08 PM

Hey,

This is another superb poem. I hope things have gotten a little better than your last poem (suicide). Keep up this great work, until your next time

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-06 02:01 PM

it's true, you shouldn't even consider those actions of a friend's. Hope things are better. Great job on the poem.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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