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All in Vain?
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All in Vain? |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
All in Vain? Both were beautiful, young, and restless. Ready for anything, the world could bring. For the sight of each other, made them breathless. But little did they know, the bells of sorrow were soon to ring. With them, they brought, Jackson, Ty, and even little Cole. All very little, cute, and sweet. But the bells, when they came, the children is what they stole. Then the two, came to help, they put up a very good feat. Their fought was all in vain. But the bells did spare them, almost all their pain. All but one,the branch of love still had a stem. This poem was written by me to one of my best friends and her boyfriend |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was great. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain [This message has been edited by Ina (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice job, Spine. From what I've read today, I really like your work, and I look forward to reading more. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute. I'm sure they loved it.  ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
hey, Great job -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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