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to the parents who claim they love me
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to the parents who claim they love me |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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This was probaly the most painful experience in my life. due to the fact it had to do with my parents. i know its long... The kitchen table during the inbetween of supper and dessert, the anger simmers "I don't fail on purpose, daddy!" Gaby please shut up I cant take your skrieking tonight, cant you stop my own inner words seem silly and confusing "And you Regina, why couldnt you hand in your poetry assignment on time, 30 days late!" oh man why can't i live in this house with just one night of quiet "Look at her goes in one ear and flys out the next, idiot!" tears burn at the souls, knots forms in my stomach, please dont hit me, I pray, I wish "Victor! Stop yelling. Regina your 3/4 under the water almost dead" leave me, alone stop hurting me, I cant handle this anymore, no words are being formed, they're right im stupid,useless, worthless ".....fluke, she chokes on everything, never has she ever completed one goddamn thing in her life, the debate was a fluke" I hate you too father dearest, you lie you don't love me, you think I've hurt look how you've hurt me I can't focus on the conversation going on around me anymore "dont ask her anything Natania,she doesn't know anything, stupid child she is" the pain is too much to control tears run down my cheeks stinging acid burns down my face "Victor!! she is intelligent" "how do we know, shes nothing" "youre right" please someone come save me where is a friend when I need you, i need your support "you make me angry, I want nothing to do with you regina, you dont even deserve that name" Oh please no, this battle inner and outer are getting too hard, friend come save me please! "I hate you too, I want nothing to do with either of you" I storm out of the kitchen my kilt swishing "GET BACK HERE!!!NOW!" this war is gonna ruin me I have to leave the door closes, spring air greets me eyes swollen, body aching I walk away Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain [This message has been edited by Ina (edited 04-10-2001).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Regina, I'm going to tell you something. You are not alone. We're all here to support you, me included, because I've had very, VERY similar situations occur in my own home. It isn't right, it isn't fair...but people like you and me have to learn to rise above their stupidity and their ignorance. Okay? *hugs* write it away... Love always, Carly NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
i can't really say anything about your poem, it is all about pain, pain that i can share, but i just hope that for the most part that everything might be ok someday and i hope that pain the we suffer will someday not be used on our own kids..live and learn, |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Ina, She said it best...and she meant it. We are all here for you. Its one big family. The poem was good, tough to read though. Pain is tough, i know what you mean, and there are people in this community that face similar problems, and are more then willing to talk to you about them We are love each other. Its Great here, you learn to love each other. See you later for now, hope the best to you. Jeff  |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
We all love each other in here Regina................Carly is right. Good Luck Jeff |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ina...like sumone said before ..you're not alone...god if i had a dollar for every time id felt like that id be second to bill gates...hang in there hunny *hugs* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I know how it feels to hurt like this sweetie, and don't ever think that you're alone because we're all here to give our support. send me an email if you ever need to talk and thank you for sharing something so personal. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank you everyone for your replies. Just reading them helped make me feel a little bertter. Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey... I liked the poem, it was very emotional. You know where to find me if you need to talk. ~Allan Love is like the wind; it can suddenly blow softly in your face or it can come strong. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina, I know how you are feeling. Heck, my parents were going to kick me out, just because I am a smartass and they were fed up, I got out before they could though.Do whatever you can to prove them wrong. You are not dumb or stupid as they were saying, you couldn't write how you do, if you were. All I can say is try to work things out with them because everyone needs their parents, no matter how much they think they don't. Good luck and keep writing,cause it takes the edge off the pain. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I'm not personally aqquainted with you Regina and I'm not going to pretend that I am, but I definitely understand your pain in this poem. My parents, especially my mom, does the same thing. She calls me names and things that I can't even repeat here. My dad has a very, very violent temper. Although you don't really know me, if you want to talk I'll listen. I'd be more than happy to. Excellent poem, Regina. Keep writing. I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Regina. This poem is very emotional, and I can't imagine how much it hurt you to share it with us. I'm glad you did, it's very well written... The pain in this piece is so powerful. I'm so sorry you have to go through this. I'm not going to say I know how you feel because I don't. But you're never alone... You have so many people in Passions that care about you, and would love to talk to you if you need someone to talk to. It's horrible that you have to go through something like this, because no one on this Earth ever will or ever has deserved it.. but learning how to deal with the pain is half the battle. Please keep writing, it helps.. --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad Regi. If you need to talk to somebody I'm here for you *hugs* I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a sad poem but it happens to a lot of kids and I think it sucks. I hope things get better for you. This was a great poem never the less just wanted to let you know that. Until next time -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thanx for your replies. means beaucoup. Regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I do believe that this happens to most of us. eventhough....~*hugs Ina*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
I know exactly what you are going through, My parents are the same way. i know it is hard to live in hell everyday but we make it somehow. keep on writing you thoughts down. it helps, trust me. they may never see how they hurt you but at least you can get the pain out and not have it build up til you explode. i did that. if you ever need anyone to talk to ever, i don't care what for, you can always write me. GREAT poem!!! lots of love, dana |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
omg im sooo sorry hun...we all luv ya lots..and your a great writer!!! :::hugs::: *~KiM~* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey girl, this is terribly sad. It hit's a little too close to home for me. It seems like there is so little you can do sometimes, ya know? well that's how I felt. I hope things get beeter... if you need to talk, you know how to reach me Jason |
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