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Some One
Junior Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 10

0 posted 2001-04-07 09:38 AM

MY SORROWS HAVE NO SOUND
NO NAME, NO PAIN, NO WORD LIKE THIS

NO ONE ESCAPES,
NO THOUGHT PROTECTS US
NOTHING...

NOTHING CAN STOP THIS,
NOTHING CAN CHANGE THIS

YOU CAN'T SEE, HEAR OR FIGHT AGAINST IT,
WE ARE IN ITS HANDS.

Heart=Life
Junior Member

since 2001-02-03

Posts 29
United Kingdom

1 posted 2001-04-07 11:04 AM

Powerful thought, but what gave you this power you describe? Good post keep it up

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-04-07 12:03 PM

Hey,

I agree with everything Heart. said

so until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-07 01:39 PM

Ooh... I'm going to be thinking of what "it" could possibly be for the rest of the day.
Good thought-provoker.
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-07 02:37 PM

Nice one here. Very powerful poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-07 10:30 PM

This is a good poem, it really made me think. The only thing that I would suggest is the caps lock. Next time, stay away from all caps. nice job on the poem, though. I can't wait to read more from you.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Fading Away (edited 04-07-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-04-07 10:42 PM

good job! but yea caps r better not used when not necessary. keep writin

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