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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Where am I supposed to go? Where am I supposed to see? Where am I supposed to meet The destiny that awaits for me? What am I supposed to learn? What am I supposed to hear? What am I supposed to know That will keep me safe from fear? Who am I supposed to be? Who am I supposed to touch? Who am I supposed to free That means to me so much? Why am I supposed to feel? Why am I supposed to love? Why am I supposed to be Strong as a lion, yet graceful as a dove? When am I supposed to know? When am I supposed to see? When am I supposed to fly, To see what I will see? How am I supposed to finish All the things I have begun? If only I could drop these questions, Just drop them all and run. It can't be! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this poem was full of questions man. I liked it though. I thought the ending was great. Nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like the repitition here. Very nice job... a lot of questions are presented. Good luck on finding the answers. Nicely done. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like your last stanza in this one. Good job on the poem  "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I really like this poem a lot, and i especially like the ending of it. if i were to make a suggestion it would be to change await in the the first stanza to wait, but that's just me. nice job, keep posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
All these questions is part of growing up. I guess we try to find ourselves at this time in life. This was a great read. thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed this read lots... great poem.. and for the questions,they will all go away soon as we depart..muhahaha  hehe...just kidding...keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
So many questions that every single person will ask at least one stage in their life. Thanks for a read that I really needed to see right now. ~AF~ " Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it." |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I liked this, it was really great. |
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