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chaz-finn New Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 2 |
The dark side lingers within me and yet I'm not discomforted on the contrary I embrace my new found illusion of eternal rest, At the shoulder of demons I cry out his name awaiting his reply. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
welcome to passions! hope u enjoy it here. great first post. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Welcome, welcome welcome. This was a great entry post...very great...the huge font gave it that much more of the Bam factor...*shivers* yeah, I love these shiver poems... ~Carly Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS It's nice to you here. Nice poem to start things off. Good job. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions! keep writing and posting. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I really did enjoy this poem a great deal! We all have that dark side lingering inside of us, don't we? Don't hide it, let it come out of the tip of your pen... and the result is a wonderful work of art, every time.  This time is no exception. Welcome to Passions in Poetry! (ps- check your email for a special greeting) ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I truly enjoyed this one. Short, but good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Write from all sides and thanks for the big print, I have old eyes. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i knoe i'm kinda LATE but.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS hope u like it here and post and share wit all us c u around |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to Passions!!! Very interesting poem  keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Welcome to passions! I just recently singed up as well, great poem I hope to read more. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a great poem I liked it a lot good start hope to see more oh and Welcome to Passions. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
WELCOME, WELCOME, WELCOME, TALK ABOUT MAKING A "BIG" INTRODUCTION - well, actually, I've never heard that before in my life, I think I just made it up...oh dear, I think I need sleep, is there such a thing as "psycho-disfunctional-sleep-nada" disorder? Probably not... Well *clears throat* um...*grabs chaz-finn's hand and shakes it* welcome to passions. Nice poem. |
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