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princess^sarah
Member

since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-03-31 04:32 AM

We all lose someone we love,
But they are watching from above.
Forever in our hearts they stay,
The memories are with us day by day.
We will have our moments and talk
Of you and all the things you use to do.
Resting peacefully as you lay,
The family are gathered here today.
To let the angels take you away.
So my dearly departed,
We all sit here brokenhearted.
As we remember you your journey is
Just about through.............

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

1 posted 2001-03-31 04:57 AM

wow, this one touched on a subject I am rather intruiged by so of course I loved it. Other than the subject matter the simple style was nice too. Great work

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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-03-31 11:55 AM

Simple, too the point. i liked it very much.

regina

btw your other posts were great.

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-31 12:24 PM

So much was put into a short poem.
Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-04-01 01:20 PM

I felt you did very good on this one. A lot of truth here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-04-01 05:03 PM

i luved the poem
this topic seems to be in a lot of ur poems
anyhow i enjoy and love all poems from u

ohh yea i wish u would reply to some poems not jus postin but replyin i bet all of us would like to hear from u in many different ways...

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-01-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-07 09:02 PM

simple but such a poem is loved so much. loved it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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