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Love and Pain
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Love and Pain |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Happy now, Lakewalker?  This is actually a repost, but since I don't have anything new written, I chose this one to post here.Sometimes when you love someone it hurts you real bad Along with friendship come the good times and also come the sad There are things that have to happen that affect you and your friend And there's nothing you can do about it except wait for the end. You wish that you could just reach out and take away the pain But from all the grief and sorrow there is something you can gain. Remember that the book of life never states things will be fair And sometimes all that you can do is show your friend you care. These situations teach you the real meaning of strife And the lessons you will learn from them will last you all your life. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Good to see you posting in here, Elizabeth! Anyway, this is a pretty good piece. I can't say it's your best, but I like it. The things you say are very true, and you give some great advice. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This has a good message. I like this a lot! Good job... --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one. A lot of truth within it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
great read, it is so true! -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ah, quite inspirational. I think a lot of young people could gain a lot by reading this. Good job, Elizabeth. Thank you for gracing us with your presence.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Erica, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's one of my older pieces, written about two years ago, and it was inspired by one of my friends (who still hasn't seen it, lol). Anyway, thanks! Marie, thank you very much! Javier, glad you liked! Pixie-Babe, you're right, it is very true! Many thanks! Allan, well aren't you sweet. Glad to be here reading in Teen. Thank you!    |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well it's just so nice to see you here, I don't even know how to respond to this poem. *smacks himself* Sorry, uh, nice job on the poem, it's so true, so true. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wham!!! Very true Lizzy, very true This is a great piece Nice too see you sharing in the forum Next time, make it a new one "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, good job keep it up very good message -- Linc |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Lakewalker thanks....didn't see your reply until now! Glad you liekd it. Acire...I'll think about that. Hehe, thanks. Linc...thank you! |
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