Teen Poetry #4 |
Why me? |
HappyPretender Junior Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 38Prince George, VA |
Why me What did I do To be the point of anger I always screw up I'm never right I'm treading this line of danger Danger of losing Losing what matters most I can't get things right I make no one happy And this question I ask Without a response Why me? <3~*Rachael*~<3 |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Because it happens to everybody. You're not alone and this doesn't only happen to you. Good luck with whatever's going on. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Everyone battles with these questions. Remember that. Good poem --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Like Dopey said, this happens to everyone. We all have times in our lives where we ask things like this, and I hope sharing this helped you out. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This told your message well, but the sentences didn't flow really good for me. That's the only thing I see with this one, other than that, it's great "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'll agree with Lake... the flow could be patched up a bit more. But you had great thoughts in here. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i think its a question 4 all those who go throught lifes pain and struggles but i guess some do more sufferin then others and those whos strong will survive |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh goshy... if I could answer this for you... maybe I could do the same for myself. We all have pain and heartache... but what goes up must come down and vise versa, so the dawn does approach, good luck. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Some days we feel like evrything goes wrong. We should just learn to be happy with what we have. And when someone doesn't appreciate the goodness you've shown, don't let them make you feel that you've never done anything right. be strong "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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