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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-22 08:33 PM

In the morning

After a night of fun & passion
We fell asleep in each other’s arms
As I woke I wrapped my arms around him tighter
He turned to me, opened his beautiful blue eyes
And whispered so sweetly, “I love you always.”

Hey, i havn't been in here for a while coz i've been sososo busy with school and other things this yr! this is just something i wrote this morning coz i was thinking about when i went away with my special boy

hope you like it!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 03-22-2001).]

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-03-22 08:53 PM

It's good to see you back! This is a beautiful demonstration of your love. Short but sweet. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-22 09:45 PM

Yeah, short and sweet, just like me!

j/k
Well this was nicely done. All I know about Kris is that he's a lucky guy.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-03-23 08:07 AM

Awwww, that's so sweet!!! I love it! Thanks for posting it!

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-03-23 08:41 AM

Lovely. I'm sure he'll love you forever if he knows you write these sorts of things about him.

Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

"It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory."
-W. Edwards Deming

WaitN4AnAngel
Junior Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 37
I wish I knew where I was...

5 posted 2001-03-23 09:24 AM

This poem really shows you love for this guy. Dont stray off again, cuz I would miss a fellow poet!!

*Me*

*If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything*
*A smile is a curve that straightens out a lot of things*

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-03-23 10:29 AM

Aww... that's so sweet! I liked this a lot! Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-03-23 02:37 PM

Welcome back! This poem was extremely sweet.
Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-03-30 03:08 PM

Short poem, but it still captures the essence of how it is to and be loved

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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