Teen Poetry #4 |
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In the morning... |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia ![]() |
In the morning After a night of fun & passion We fell asleep in each other’s arms As I woke I wrapped my arms around him tighter He turned to me, opened his beautiful blue eyes And whispered so sweetly, “I love you always.” Hey, i havn't been in here for a while coz i've been sososo busy with school and other things this yr! this is just something i wrote this morning coz i was thinking about when i went away with my special boy ![]() Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* [This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's good to see you back! This is a beautiful demonstration of your love. Short but sweet. Thanks for sharing. ![]() "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, short and sweet, just like me! ![]() Well this was nicely done. All I know about Kris is that he's a lucky guy. ![]() ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Awwww, that's so sweet!!! I love it! Thanks for posting it! "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Lovely. I'm sure he'll love you forever if he knows you write these sorts of things about him. Keep 'em coming. ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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WaitN4AnAngel Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 37I wish I knew where I was... |
This poem really shows you love for this guy. Dont stray off again, cuz I would miss a fellow poet!! *Me* |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww... that's so sweet! I liked this a lot! Good job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome back! This poem was extremely sweet. Hope to see more! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short poem, but it still captures the essence of how it is to and be loved "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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