Teen Poetry #4 |
Watching Time Part 2 |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I used to watch people. having fun, sharing laughter, making memories, reminding me of myself, before I was changed, and I began to watch other things. I used to think it wasn't worth while, to try and change life, to try and make it better, to try and change what you don't like, to try and fix everything, to make it all better, to make something of life. I used to hate the things I couldn't fix, all I didn't have an effect on, all I couldn't change, everything I wanted to change, but couldn't seem to reach, all I wanted to fix, everything that was anything but perfect. Watching Time, was all I used to do, untill the day, you changed that, untill you changed me, untill you changed life, untill life became worth while. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice job on this one, Allysa! "Thank You" poems are always so sweet, especially when done correctly. Keep up the good work. You have been impressing me quite a bit lately. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I feel very special now! Seriously, Allan, your comments mean a lot to me. You're always correcting me, and everyone else, letting us push to do our best, and I'm thrilled that this meets your approval. (hugs Allan really really tight) Well, g2g do that whole school deal. Although, sometimes it seems more like prison than school. Oh well, see ya later! I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"used to hate the things I couldn't fix, all I didn't have an effect on, all I couldn't change, everything I wanted to change, but couldn't seem to reach, all I wanted to fix, everything that was anything but perfect." This is very good! I know how that is. Good message. Nicely written! --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*pojnts and laughs at you having to go to school* A beautiful poem, Allysa. I hope this guy knows just how happy he has made you. ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece displaying how this person changed your life. I'm so glad that you have someone like this who is there for you. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done Allysa..*hugs* I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yup, nice job "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I see a big growth in your poetry Allysa What is causing this inspiration You did well again my friend keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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