Teen Poetry #4 |
Lambs to the slaughter. |
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
See the crowd that follows me Watch me now i'll set them free But they wander back they are all sheep Leader of pack I cannot sleep I'm hating every minute I cannot see the beast Boredom reigns infinite no excitemnet in the least Every little lamb that wanders far away I couldn't give a dang if I'm leading them astray I cannot see a single thought if any have a brain Sheep waiting to be caught wolves waiting here again I know I'm just a lowly sheep who couldn't give a dang I'm no bo peep and I seem to have lost a lamb I'm wondering if they'll ever go and find their own way Up into the heather if they'll leave me fort just one day I'm a sheperd in this flock I guide them with my crook But the road ahead is blocked and I'm running out of luck. I don't why but I'm in a peculiar mood... umm... it's just a shame that pretty soon there won't be many sheep to right about thanks to Foot and mouth... Anyway a tribute to all those people who call themselves friends. Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never. [This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I liked those poem, mostly because there are people who will follow me when I don't want them to! I hate it when someone expects me to have the answer to every problem, and sometimes I just send a sheep out, and when the rest see what happens to it, they back off. Mean I know... "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job as usual, Marshal. I thought it was very original. And about "foot and mouth?" We can only hope that the wonders of modern medicine somehow pull us through. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I thought the poem was well written. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Awesome poem... I like this a lot. Good job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Let's just hope that this is the last of that desease "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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