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princess^sarah
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since 2001-01-12

Posts 131
melbourne

0 posted 2001-01-16 03:13 AM

I look up at the dark sky,
theres one bright star in the sky
i wish i could find hapiness
but all i can do is cry.

Theres memories of you in my head,
theres loneliness in my heart,
i wish my life wasnt so hard;
and that we werent so far apart.

Imiss the fire in your eyes,
i miss the way you smile,
you took away that empty feeling;
and made everyday worthwile.

i love you so much that it hurts,
with all my heart i do.
and more than anything in this world,
i hope you love me to.

i wrote this one when me and my boyfriend were arguing.
i hope u like it as much as i do

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-01-16 09:20 AM

Touching, and actually quite heartbreaking. You must really like this guy. ~_^
-Allan

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-01-16 05:30 PM

this is beautiful
what a way to express your love for someone
truly a great piece
he must be really worth it
thanks for the share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-01-16 07:21 PM

ok, here's another *bump

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-01-16 07:40 PM

I believe this is the first I am seeing of you, so, welcome!! This was very touching, ahhhh love, ain't it grand??

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-17 12:59 PM

Nice one here. I liked it.
Hope things are good with yer BF now.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2001-01-17 09:49 PM

Yes, ditto to Dopey, and nice job on this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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