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You are my destiny
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You are my destiny |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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I put this one together pretty quick, it's far from being one of my best.But please read on anyways This must be destiny You and I were meant to be When I met you I was a changed man Falling in love wasn’t part of the plan When I met you, you changed my heart I fell in love from the very start I had been hurt so many times in the past I tried to love, but I could not make it last From our very first kiss, on the very first night I knew this was different, I knew this was right Now I wake up every morning with a smile I’ve been dreaming about your beauty, your face, your style I get out of bed with a jump on the day Cause I know you are mine, and you are planning to stay So many times I have laid in bed moping So many times I have laid here hoping Hoping she would come back, she wouldn’t be gone Hoping to find a new love, or just move on Now I lay here and think of you You’ve given me a fresh start, each day is brand new Life finally has meaning, a reason, a purpose And I’m truly happy, not just on the surface You saved me from my sad hopeless life You’re the only friend who turns me around and pulls out the knife Know that whenever you need someone by your side I’ll be there Cause from now and forever I’ll always care "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
that was a very sweet poem this person is very lucky that they have such a caring person to look after them grea job ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Keoni ... you are very fortunate to have found this type of inspiration through another, great expression, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, very sweet. The title says it all. I liked this one keoni.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very sweet nice to know you're doing good in your life I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I wish I was doing this good. The idea for this poem and my last post just popped into my head. Actually me and my g/f broke up two nights ago, so I'm not quite as happy as this one sounds. Thanks for the replies. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well I was going to agree with the others and say I'm glad you're feeling this way, but you're not feeling this way. So I hope you make it through this time well, and great job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I know how you feel and i am shur that a lot of us can relate. This was a great poem, full of meaning, and i liked it very much! Thanks for sharing! |
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