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Teen Poetry #4

Think I Love You

starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-03-11 01:09 AM

"Think I Love You"

You put your head on my shoulder,
Something happened then that I didn't want to.
I felt something deep inside, wanting to escape.
I held it in, and hoped you didn't feel it too.
I was scared to admit, I think I love you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-11 11:56 AM

Hey I really enjoyed this poem. I felt the butterflies in your stomach, the tingle all over your body, hard breathing, and a sense of worry. Love.....when you realize it it can be quite scary.

Either that or it was gas....but hey.....we'll go with love on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-03-11 12:06 PM

Hey,

Aww this is short and sweet I loved it keep up the good work. Until your next poem
--Linc

"The goal is not allways the the reason something is done the path to get to the goal is more important."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-03-12 08:43 PM

hope you gave this to him
if not...i got an advice
do so...he'll love it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-13 12:59 PM

Yes, definitely give this to him/her as soon as possible.
It was an excellent poem, very short and sweet. One that poetry fans and impatient people can both enjoy.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

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