Teen Poetry #4 |
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i will always love you |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
"i will always love you" "you think so?" "i know so." because what we have is so true because whatever i do i think of you because of when we're together because i know it's you i want to spend my life with i want to always be with i want to love 'til i die i dont want this to be a myth i dont want to let you go i dont want to watch you go i dont want to ever lose you i really wish i could show how much i love you how much i need you too how much i care for you how much i dont want to lose you i love you baby and i know so CLB |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I'm gonna cry now!! ![]() I love you ![]() Bel Wow I can't believe what you wrote..wow.... |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hmmmmmm.......quite sweet hehe. Looks like she loved it. Mission accomplished. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
hehe yup thanks dopy ![]() let the fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same imply ~EvE 6 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this, it's done well, good poem ![]() "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
THIS IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This was really good, I really enjoyed reading it and i'm looking forward to reading somemore of your work. Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
At last: proof that good guys do exist! The male species no longer has an excuse! In all seriousness, this was a great poem. I loved it. So did every other girl who read it. Trust me. ![]() "There is only one rain cloud in the sky, and it's raining on me. Somehow I'm not surprised." "Make your life like toilet paper - long and useful." |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Just doing a little innocent bumping up here... Ahem don't mind me! ![]() Bel |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I was gonna say the same thing Her reaction shows what kind of poem this is keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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