Open Poetry #12 |
Acrostic Calendar Of Thoughts |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*Marge Tindal~* Just a little case oF Anxiety of this versE Now I cannot tell A fiB Unless this becomes youR Arrangement for a SenyrU Raising the ante,I say,AhA Yearning to finish this yeaR .....................seeMinglY ........................Arriving .....at a conclusion, foRegone ........................Coming in ........................Heralding A new song sung on Precious spring voices Rumbling with the Images of Spring's Laughter.............Merrily .....................Alluding to .....................Yearnings of Joy Unearthed in Naked abandon of Erstwhile pursuits of Jubilant ......................Undertakings ......................Laying .................merelY Amongst the Unique flowerbeds of Granted wishes Undeniably Seeking a special Touch from handS ...............Epitomizing the ...............Pampering of ...............The ...............Embryo of thought ...............Maturing in the ...............Blending of minds ...............Equalizing the ...............Rationality Of Concientious Thoughts Orbiting the Boundries of Eternity and Returning to Nest in .............Ordinary .............Vagueness of questioned .............Epistles .............Marking the vestiges of .............Belief in .............Eternal life and .............Ruminating with Dedications of Ethereal Considerations Emanating from Manifestations Borne on the light of Eternal truths of the Return of the Messiah *From the Poetry Workshop Forum ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marvelous aglow rare grace excellent!!! Poeminister |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Now I am just gonna go nuts trying to figure out how to do these.......I'll be up all night!!! Marge, this is AWESOME! I really want to learn how to do this, I will be trying this out! Very neat style! -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
My stars what an endeavor and successully won, mastered, woven. Fully enjoyed this. Amazing! |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
NICE!! I like the format!! I think it's very creative!! I just can't help but think that format would take forever to figure out unless that was a flash of pure inspiration! Way cool! --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautifully Creative Marge. Nice work Rich |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
and that's talent for ya Margie wonderful acrostic, I'm so jealous cause I love em and I aint that good....good on ya hon, superb piece ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ I so appreciate your talented reply. SEA~ Thanks, hon. The thoughts came quickly and surprisingly coherent ... The finishing touches challenged me ... I enjoyed doing this one very much. Give it a go, sweet poet. VAS~ My goodness - I do thank you so much. Artistic~ It was a combination punch of inspiration and manueverability. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Spiked~ I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you. Tracie~ Oh, but you will ... Let those thoughts flow, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is as fabulous as anything I've ever seen. The way you've written this is superb, and you obviously have talent in abundance. Excellant piece love, truly outstanding. And no I don't think I'll try it, it looks far too hard for me. (Yes why won't people believe me when I say I'm terminally lazy. To stretch is one thing to work dear heart quite another. ) Take care kid Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge, I am speechless! This is absolute exquisite perfection! Love, Ellie Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ *Hugs* and thanks. Bet you could try at least ONE ! ! Ellie~ Thanks so very much, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge....*WOW*.what a marvelous Calendar...love your acrostic creativity and thoughts. thanks for sharing excellent as always my friend (((hugs))) Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow! Amazing you could do this! I will have to print this one for sure. You are one creative lady! Hugs, Deb |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Amazing, no matter how you spell it!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you have way too much time on your hands!!! WOW! Things I wouldn't even attempt you make look simple! * bowing * |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ So glad to share with you. I think the diagnosis back from the lab is acrostically-challenged ! LOL ! BloomingRose~ Thank you. It really was a fun piece to do. PoetdeVine~ Even gnizama ??? LOL ! Thank you. Balladeer~ Too much time on my hands ? Nah ... just checked my calendar - only got twelve months ! It really wasn't that difficult to write - and the only 'real work' was in the formatting. You should see the one I'm doing with FIREMEN models ! LOL ! Maybe next year ! *Thanks to all of you for enjoying this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So you took the acrostic 501 class and moved to the front. Wonderfully done my friend and I don't care what you say.........THIS WASN'T EASY AT ALL. I would say that with this effort you should at least get a scholarship to go with your grade. Totally awesome and of course........."Margeificant" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
WOW!!!! *Sighs* This is so well penned, you make it look so easy and yet I know that it is quite the feat. You should be very proud of this double yearly acrostic! APPLAUSE FOR MARGE! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow, Marge, very creative!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you, love. WAS TOO ! *wink* Melissa~ Thanks, sweetie. LOVE your new colors ! Denise~ Thank you. AND just where have you been ? I've missed you and was concerned. Answer your e-mail ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, sorry to have worried you, Marge, I was sick again and not on the 'puter...I can't access my DirectWeb or my Juno email (they restricted me to 4 a.m. because of my heavy use...can you believe it?) So,I have yet another ISP....AT&T Worldnet....I'm very happy with them! My new email address is...*drum roll* snyder.denise@worldnet.att.net Keep those cards and letters coming!! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-12-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, I'm surprised I didn't catch this one in open forum before... My DearPoetFriend your talent shines in this acrostic calendar... This is brilliant writing and my compliments to you... So back up2top this one goes... it's AWESOME! ~coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Tee-Hee on the *drum-roll* ... I'm just glad you're all better ! CocoBaci~ Well ... I voted for that name so I'll use it cause I LOVE IT ! Thanks for your carousing of the back pages. You're a doll ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is SO CLEVER...you continue to amaze so gracefully Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Thanks, gal. It really was bushels of fun to do ! Didn't even need a Tylenol ! Did ya' ever do that Paradellie-Doo-Doo ? LOL ! I didn't think so ! You're so fun ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I think you need to get out of the office for awhile... But what do I know... I dream of dragging and droping all night long... I wake to find nothing has ever changed and all my notes are gone and can't be found. Is this a new syndrome of some kind... Is there a cure..? How much does it cost..? Am I covered..? Will I get well..? Is this a good time for, LOL Much love, dale . |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
oops [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky, my friend~ I agree with you. Glad to get the chance to convene with nature and hug humanity. Reaching out - touching ... You know I'm thinking of you ... and my prayers surround you. Love~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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