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A Light Senryu
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A Light Senryu |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 In heaven’s light many miracles occur to smile down on us In heaven’s light Many tragedies occur Heaven holds us up Under this, the light Let me smile within your face Loving passion’s grace In heaven’s light Many passions can be found For you, there is Me I will fly in you Be your wings, carry you through In heaven’s light 01.25.01 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In heaven’s light Many passions can be found For you, there is Me" LOVE this!  -SEA(This is so perfect) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very pretty, Sunshine. Light...lovely light. I am learning more about senyru, me thinks. I didn't know it could be several stanzas. I must learn more yet. Of course until December, I didn't even know there was such a form. ;o} |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
senryu sequence and very nice...actually it qualifies to be termed a choka. smiles I enjoyed it it whatever we want to term it  Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine--Love these. My favorite is the last one. Poeminister< !signature--> "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely senryu's sunshine..enjoyed ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Beautiful as always dearheart...shine on We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sunshine....these sunryu's are heavenly....each of them are jewels. love them all. Charisma |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"In heaven’s light Many passions can be found For you, there is Me I will fly in you Be your wings, carry you through In heaven’s light" Someone is very very fortunate - I shall imagine your support nonetheless - my wings have faltered of late marvelous senryus truly |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Ya know some poems I read almost shout at ya. Yours seem to have a soft,gentle whisper as I read thru them. You do have a bit of magic in that pen of yours. Very nice. Mr.Magoo |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, Karilea, this haiku poem is just beautiful, what an inspirational verse of God's love and friendship! Your light is well appreciated by all of us at Passions  ~Hugs Ms. Sunshine~Take care, Ms. Melybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all for your beautiful comments...I know I shouldn't string my senryus together...just can't help myself, do like the word "choka"...brings a lovely, gemlike quality to the string of words.... |
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