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Loving A Man {Tanka}
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Loving A Man {Tanka} |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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To know him; love him. Become a part of his soul, Total devotion Don't just get under his skin. You need to run through his veins. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh you are so right.....not just under his skin...but running through his veins...love that ....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it koko, and its nice when he runs thru yours too ha...enjoyed..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
thanks and yes it's nice when he runs through yours too  I am afraid the muse gets the satsifaction in the write, but I am still window shopping yet. LOL Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Koko....this....is wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Brilliant ! I've been known to give a transfusion or two !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful poem with such sincerity and love! I've never even heard of the Tanka style, perhaps I'll try it soon! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And I do want the right one to run thru my veins...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful write. Running through the veins is the only way. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the read  very interesting concept |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
smiles....yep running through the veins... otherwise forget it! LOL thanks Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thats definitly the way. Nicely said. Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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