Tearpools of Sadness (cinquain)

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Open Poetry #12

Tearpools of Sadness (cinquain)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-01-24 09:58 PM

     Teardrops
     fall slowly down
     into her broken heart.
     She drowns in tear pools of sadness.
     Love lost.

(for anyone knowing Cinquain's let's have some fun,
and add on to this to make it have a happy ending.  There's the challenge, have fun with it!!)

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-01-24 11:03 PM

Sadness
creeps so coldly
until the break of day
Then heartlight thaws a frigid soul
they say

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-01-25 05:45 AM

That is wonderful Rex, and I agree that heartlight does thaw the soul!! Thanks for joining in the fun. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.
Donna Smith

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 2001-01-25 11:28 PM

Sunshine
beams softly down
drying up her tears
and forming rainbows with them
She smiles

(is that happy enough?)

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

4 posted 2001-01-25 11:33 PM

salty
teardrops don't freeze
they melt the ice on love
bringing romance back to lovers
embrace

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