Open Poetry #12 |
Winter of Love |
Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Winter Of Love Every sound is bursting with silence, Hollow hands hold snow of emptiness. Deaf dark nights hear nothing but An imprisoned heartbeat Caressed by cold feathers. Pale blue skies miss clouds of pleasure, Faded, The rain of tears turns into deathdancing snowflakes. Your voice, lingering, Forever lost In the wind of indifference. Frail crystal future Breaks under my feet On the path of togetherness, Where we once walked. Mirror of faith on hardened lakes of intransigence Requesting Amor's power To melt and free The enclosed blossom of longing. Winter memories freeze laughter of joy Forming ice patterns of beautiful moments On the river of my passion. Where once was warm breath Gusty gales gamble with my ears. Relentless, incessant, impulsive forces Trying to shatter the castle of my hopes. But through the opressive silence Comes the soothing sound Of your avowing heart... Beat! Distant but strong Echoes of eternity. True and sure warrior against dullness. Irrefutable Like the river of your love Breaking through mountains Climbing hills Overcoming obstacles In the longing for deliverance In reunion... ...with the awaiting sea. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bee, I loved this one, and if this is your first post, I am anxious to read more!!!!! This painted Winter pictures, but added a splash of warmth with the heartbeat......great job!! Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful first post with Passions! Sit back, relax, enjoy, read, write, and if you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact a moderator! And check your e-mail for a special message! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bee~ Welcome to the wonderful world of passionate poets ! A lovely beginning and we'll look forward to more. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Bee! This is a beautiful piece of writing! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Bee~ ~Welcome to Passions~ This was a superb first post, I just loved it! I look forward to more of your poems Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice, Bee and welcome to passions. I'm fairly new, too. Getting to know the fantastic and varied talent in this place. |
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Bee Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 23Ireland |
Thank you all for a very warm welcome and your encouraging words! You seem to be a fine circle of poets....and a very big one compared to "all poets". I am amazed at the enormous creativity. I will try and relax, sit back, enjoy reading and writing and being inspired. LOL Bee. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Warriors come out to plaa aaay Warriors come out to plaa aaay Distant but strong I like your write yuh |
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