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The Quill's Feather [repost #3, just because]
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The Quill's Feather [repost #3, just because] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Quill’s Feather By my soul so very long ago she took me in her pink-white hands and bade me write, strand by strand. Dipping my tip in the blackest ink she put her thoughts on paper fine feelings that she shared were partly mine. She knew not my feelings when her liquid feelings flowed from my pen knowing I would write for her again, and again. She took time putting to black line her deepest passions left unheard except for these here, her written words. Penmanship extraordinaire writing with beauty, grace, flair keeping her loving words safely here. When feelings became warm she would clutch me tighter, then the feather at my top would quiver when She caught her own gasp at the lines of devotion she wrote down feelings of love she would within drown, drown. Those were the times best when quivering feather laid to rest for love’s passion had met passion’s test. 6 October, 1999 ©KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
O'Siyo,Karilea~ The spirit bade me - come and see~ Thank you for touching ... So lovely is this ... so very lovely. How do we do that ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You are blessed with a quill that writes beauty in poetry, my friend...this is awesome!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - You and Martie - are you twins separated at birth ? I swear if not that you both use the same muse - who reveals with your uniqueness but you two are SOOOO good! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, not how, but because...we know...{~,^}...I hear you on the wind... Martie, it's only my quill that is awesome, I am the recipient, as are you!...and aren't we the fortunate ones?... Mr. Yeats, I have it on good authority we were not separated at birth...but we do sometimes inhabit the same plane...thank you for reading!... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When feelings became warm she would clutch me tighter, then the feather at my top would quiver when She caught her own gasp at the lines of devotion she wrote down feelings of love she would within drown, drown. Those were the times best when quivering feather laid to rest for love’s passion had met passion’s test. ===================== just because??? dont need a reason to repost something so full of grace... this is wonderful ... poetry in motion "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you JanetMarie.... |
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