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My Song
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My Song |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Like a song, my heart responds within your gentle touch... My melody takes shape within your kiss... The notes become a lover's verse, each one is felt so much... The song becomes a melody of bliss... Many years ago, you found me sitting on a shelf... All alone and playing out of key... You looked into my heart and heard the song within myself... And found the notes just waiting there in me... From you, I learned to sing again, to open up my voice... To let my song resound upon the wind... And now you hear a melody, each day I sing by choice... My song becomes eternal, without end... Forever will we sing, my love, in perfect harmony... My song is now a melody for two... And while our hearts are keeping time within love's symphony... Forever will my song belong to you... Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent flow! Lovely! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ VAS ~~~ Oh...thank you so much, my friend....I'm pleased that you read and enjoyed this today!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Sunny....James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Beautifully tender in declare, well done. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ James ~~~ Thank you for visiting me this morning!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sy ~~~ I thank you so.....and am really glad that you enjoyed the tenderness in this one! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
*another sigh* So much beauty in passions today... Soft and tender...I loved this... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, Sunny, how do you attach that picture to the poem? "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Breathe ~~~ So glad you stopped by and enjoyed this work of mine!! Thank you!! ~~~ Irish Rose ~~~ Good to see you here, my friend. I will email you to show you how to add graphics. Thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
great thanks so much!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Anytime, Kathleen.....let me know if my email helped you.....have a great day!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Sunny, I guess this means you are taken! Oh, misery. Oh, crumbled dream. Things are never as they seem. Here I'd fallen for your verse, Hopes are shattered now, or worse. ....but it's all right Sunny, And don't you worry over me. I will find another honey, Some other time, you wait and see. Oh, blackened moon. Oh, direful day. Oh, bitter gall of precious loss. Oh, empty cup. Oh, whirl-away. I must bear this dreadful cross. Farewell, the terpsichodic tender tickler |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
[This message has been edited by Stan (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Stan, you silly man... it's as plain as the fingers that rest on your hand! A poetess writes from the world that she knows... And sometimes it's poetry, or it is prose, It may contain truth, and sometimes it's a tale... But secrets abound, and if not...... then I failed!!! Thank you, my good friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Sunny, Really moving poem, May you write on forever............... bbent ~ live and let live ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ bbent ~~~ Thank you, my friend.......I hope to do just that!!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
...And how beautiful your song is! If this is based on your situation right now, I am happy for you!  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ M.H. ~~~ I thank you for your sweet reply and gladly accept your best wishes!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Splendid & Sweet that is what I think upon reading this lovely poem you share... SUNNY1, I enjoyed the melody of this song of heart... Great write sweetie coco |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Sunny, You still write with that caring from your soft heart. Hope that you are doing well, and look forward to hearing from you. BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Coco ~~~ So glad you enjoyed this song, and hope it put a warm melody in your mind tonight!! ~~~ evenin' Bill ~~~ Yes, all is well, and I thank you for stopping by for a visit.....hope you liked my song!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl...hugs and hugs and more hugs toyou sweet thing...I can here this clear down here...love it Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Paula ~~~ Oh, my twin......you already know that if one of us sings a melody, the other will feel and hear it!! We are twins of the soul! Thank you...... Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well sis........you gone and done it now. You got me singing your tune out loud. This was just as lovely and wonderful to read as is your heart. I would say that any man that has heard your melody is one lucky man indeed. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Forever will my song belong to you" What more could be asked of anyone? Forever, time without end...softly, beautiful my friend, and given without reservation. May you bathe in the light always. jwesley |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* this is a wonderful lovesong....love it. keep on singing....sounds wonderful ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Many years ago, you found me sitting on a shelf... All alone and playing out of key... You looked into my heart and heard the song within myself... And found the notes just waiting there in me..." Sunny, this is just wonderful! I loved the flow and sentiments in this tender piece ... love and inspiration simply shine through these words!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--Beautiful song from a loving heart, these words. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Oh, dear Brother.....thank you so much for singing my song, and for the sweet way you always reply to my words!! ~~~ jwesley ~~~ A wish of light from a good friend like you helps chase the shadows of night......thank you so much!! ~~~ Charisma ~~~ I will sing as long as I can share the melody with friends like you......... ~~~ Kit ~~~ Oh.....this is a tribute to a very special person in my life, and the feelings just had to shine through!! Thank you!! ~~~ Martie ~~~ I am so glad that you enjoyed this one...it was meant to be shared so that when you read, you could hear the melody!! Thank you, my friend!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunny1, well I just loved your song, very moving image of your love. Parker |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Parker ~~~ Thank you, my friend......and I am truly glad that you enjoyed the images and feelings! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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