Open Poetry #12 |
RoSeS iN bLoOm |
Essencesofdreams New Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 4 |
Roses are red violets are blue we were once together like roses in bloom. Roses Wilt and Roses die without your love is like a sun with no sky. The Sun turns to Moon with every sigh Everytime I think of you I start to cry. As i cry Each day I relize I should of kept you by my side. When I dream of you here with me I think of what we could'a been All is lost,Lost is allI broke your heart and now your gone. Ashes to Ashes dust to dust What I have done Is A sudden rush Feelings Rush Back Like A Roaring Flood Ill Win you back no matter what. "Life Without dreams is no life at all" |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sometimes when the Rose's are in full bloom and all is happy, it's hard to see things clearly until they are gone. Very nice writing. |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
Very Nice Poem has alot of self expersion In it keep up the lovely work. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Essencesofdreams reminds me that we don't know what we've got till it's gone. Very well done Rich |
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