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Open Poetry #12

Can't help but adore you

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-23 01:18 AM

Can't help but adore you

let's stop this dance
we can have a wild romance
hurry now cause I can't wait
it's not the time to hesitate
can't help but adore you
and you know it's true
now one heart stops beats in time
till you reach your hand to mine

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-23-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-01-23 01:29 AM

I know this feeling very well.
Beautifully expressed, and you are quite the lovely poet.

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2001-01-23 01:49 AM

Can you hear these hands applauding!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2001-01-23 08:47 AM

serenity & peppermint35, thank you.....I'm glad you enjoyed. helen

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2001-01-23 11:54 PM

Beautiful write Slick
Rich

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