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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-01-22 10:14 PM

I don't belong here
these clothes
     this place
          this time
was I really born here?
or was I brought into being
       long before this?
surely I must have been
          for I have the memories
          of those that have come before me
those whose lives I have lived for all time
their hearts beat within mine
their minds join with mine
their spirits fill my soul
and I know them
        they are me
they know me
        I am them
do I really belong here?
or I am just lost
           somewhere in time. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-22 10:19 PM

ditto...ditto...ditto...

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

2 posted 2001-01-22 10:19 PM

Wow... u echoed everything I've felt from the time I could think. I never believed I was supposed to be born in the NOW, but rather in the BEFORE. Does that make sense? Anywayz, great write!

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-01-22 10:22 PM

I think we're lost sometimes...and that feeling is one of them most frustrating. Nice writing here. Goodnight

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-01-22 10:38 PM

Very nice, Sven!

Denise

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-01-22 11:41 PM

PoetFriend Sven...
Firstly, I must say your chosen title just blew me away...
Secondly, the expression you write in this poem 'somewhere in time' has touched my heart in more ways than one...
Thirdly, a quiet applause from me to you for sharing this poem gave me a delightful read...
*~coco~*

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

6 posted 2001-01-23 01:47 AM

I recognize the feeling....fine work here!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-01-23 01:51 AM

Oh yes...I too know this feeling...the feeling of being born out of time...this is great Sven

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-01-23 07:17 AM

Oh, now you have done it! How perfect, I know what movie you like as well as I...
It's a odd feeling, isn't it, and I have also always had it.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-01-23 07:21 AM

Sven~
What a beautifully written piece.
To touch the somewhere is to find yourself.
All we are - is written in the before.

I love the ponder that makes me wander with wonder.

Wonderfully done, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

10 posted 2001-01-23 08:15 AM

Sven love, Oh this is absolutely the best of your best! Truly first class, in fact way beyond that, it is stunningly amazing. I know I wasn't here before, I'm not even sure I'm here now, perhaps that's why I'm so me. Because everything is new, I'm not blase about anything. Well whatever the reason, this is totally completely awesome.
Oh and I love it too! But you know that don't you?
Take care love
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-01-23 08:38 AM

*wow* Sven..what a fabulous penned gem have you set here....can relate on this one too... love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Iwritethepoems
Junior Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 25

12 posted 2001-01-23 08:57 AM

we're all lost in time. But we're all still ticking

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

13 posted 2001-01-23 12:05 PM

sven,
are you in my head or something?? lol...
these are my thoughts exactly. though i
could never write them as superbly as you
do. thank you for putting justice to
these thoughts. take care my friend.

amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

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