Open Poetry #12 |
somewhere in time |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't belong here these clothes this place this time was I really born here? or was I brought into being long before this? surely I must have been for I have the memories of those that have come before me those whose lives I have lived for all time their hearts beat within mine their minds join with mine their spirits fill my soul and I know them they are me they know me I am them do I really belong here? or I am just lost somewhere in time. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ditto...ditto...ditto... |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Wow... u echoed everything I've felt from the time I could think. I never believed I was supposed to be born in the NOW, but rather in the BEFORE. Does that make sense? Anywayz, great write! ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I think we're lost sometimes...and that feeling is one of them most frustrating. Nice writing here. Goodnight Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Sven! Denise |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoetFriend Sven... Firstly, I must say your chosen title just blew me away... Secondly, the expression you write in this poem 'somewhere in time' has touched my heart in more ways than one... Thirdly, a quiet applause from me to you for sharing this poem gave me a delightful read... *~coco~* |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I recognize the feeling....fine work here!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes...I too know this feeling...the feeling of being born out of time...this is great Sven |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, now you have done it! How perfect, I know what movie you like as well as I... It's a odd feeling, isn't it, and I have also always had it. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ What a beautifully written piece. To touch the somewhere is to find yourself. All we are - is written in the before. I love the ponder that makes me wander with wonder. Wonderfully done, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, Oh this is absolutely the best of your best! Truly first class, in fact way beyond that, it is stunningly amazing. I know I wasn't here before, I'm not even sure I'm here now, perhaps that's why I'm so me. Because everything is new, I'm not blase about anything. Well whatever the reason, this is totally completely awesome. Oh and I love it too! But you know that don't you? Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Sven..what a fabulous penned gem have you set here....can relate on this one too... love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Iwritethepoems Junior Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 25 |
we're all lost in time. But we're all still ticking |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven, are you in my head or something?? lol... these are my thoughts exactly. though i could never write them as superbly as you do. thank you for putting justice to these thoughts. take care my friend. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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