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Latin Waves of Passion
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Latin Waves of Passion |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Italian Sonnet < !signature-->Do you feel the Latin waves of passion? Beneath the drums of the moon tonight Come make love in fiery moonlight Swaying in the lambada of the ocean Our rhythm blends in flaunting fashion As we soar like a butterfly kite Smoldering flames of our wings incite Two Monarchs upon the seas reflection We flutter to our Brazilian samba A Mardi gras of passionate love We tremble to our dance of the rumba Your arms hold tightly like a glove We dance in white feathers, exotic salsa Masquerading as two white doves A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! What a way with words you have! This captivated me from beginning to end, and then I just had to read it again. This was so full of amazing imagery, and you chose a great theme, what a dance! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow, very lovely and passionate poem here! I love all the imagery and expression you used here, so musical and lively! Let the latin waves of passion tide on! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Melissa and Noah..I was always a good dancer haa  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Salsa with me Victoria?? Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful! Let's dance Victoria Love this |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, you incite the drummer in me (I've been playing drums since I was a child) As always you give us so much color and life...a lively and involving read! Robert Joseph |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very inviting write, Victoria! I'm not much of a dancer, but this makes me want to get up and dance! Great poem! sp  Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sven..I think i have too many clothes on haa...but ill try  ..thank you sveninsect..You will have to ask sven haa..if you can cut in haa..thank you insect Robert..Oh! Do you really..well you can really hear those drums playing than.. Great..and you must be very good too thank you Robert.. Snowpants..So happy it made you feel like dancing snowpants..thank you for peeking in dancing away~V~ ~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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