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Of Her Nature |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The lilt of word in dulcet tone most surely flows yet still , I sense the loss of her refrain , the the way her thoughts would spill onto the page in fragile wisps evoking tranquil scenes , of glades that lay in rolling hills among the evergreens Attuned in subtle ways she graced us each through eyes renewed , and eloquently shared with us , here where they might be viewed , those visions which inspired all , remembered as a gift. Was greener that , the grass which called and caused her words to drift ... away from these admiring eyes that seek familiar name ? Once more to whisper 'crost that spanse where echoes still fan flames of leaves alight with Autumn's hue that stirred at her caress . Where gone this sprite who's words spoke true , allure of Pan's temptress She did convey idyllic dreams that flowed from pure emotive streams . In truth was not imagined though , perhaps too late to tell her so . [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doc, Perhaps, but the poem was great. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is by far one of the most beautiful reads from you that I have been blessed to partake. smiles to ya, Doc...I'm always impressed by your work, but with this one? I daydream too....lovely... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully penned, Dr. Moose. I miss her too. As much as I would miss you if you were no longer gracing us with your lovely gift. Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Heck fire... this is one fine poem. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is beautifully done, Doc... and don't these silly poets know that once we let them in the door, we lock it behind them??..  |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Dr Moose, I don't know who the "she" is, but this is one great poem to her. Really liked it. Hugs, ME |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Doc, this poem is full of grace it's just beautiful my friend... And I ditto Serenity when she states 'this is one of the most beautiful reads' that you have blessed us with... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Extremely lovely.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it..beautifully written..and i loved the rhythm Mr. Magoo..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ I have not seen a lovelier write on this day ! The cadence, the lilt, the sincerity of thought - Within your quill, such grace If I were the poet, thusly sought - I'd hurry back to this place~ For myself - I thought immediately of a poetess that I miss very much. I shall drop her an e-mail to let her know that the circle is broken without her. Thank you for a gentle reminder to reach out again. *Hugs* for a wonderous write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Well, What can I say except thanks for the feed-back ? I think I made it as clear as I could without naming names . We have been deprived of a fantastic influence , and one that is sorely missed . Doc |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is beautiful, Dr. I'm sure she will think so too when she sees it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Doc, This is better than a palindromic double acrostic! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Filled my mind with many thoughts.... "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc--This is full of your sweet charm...and beautifully done. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Never too late, Doc. This is enchanting. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderful write. Beautifully articulated. ~Alison~ "Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear." |
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