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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Hazy dreams of bliss renewed loving hopes of misty blue. Violet passions bring unto golden hours spent with you. Nothing more could woman need lifetimes fragments come to seed knowing he will always heed follow him where e’r he leads. Feeling heat of love so good this is passion as it should Take my heart as just you could take me as I knew you would. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sandra. . . the title says it all. . . indeed. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
catalinamoon, I like the sounds of this. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
*sigh* lovely... very!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Sandra! Denise |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, I could't have said it better! Perfection. Love, Elise |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Catalina, Lovely write, and a lovely read. BC |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Sandra, A lover's dream unfolds in your words, enchanting work! Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Nothing more could woman need' Ahh, yes, indeed...excellent write, Sandra! I love this! Quite the romantic images! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) How beautiful! Yes, love is perfection! The most important part of life! (sigh) How romantic! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How sweet it is and how well you've written it Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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