Open Poetry #12 |
Tanka Much Margie (Margie's challenge, ) |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tanka Much Margie Okay I’ll try this But I know it won’t be bliss Tanka much Margie How can you do this for fun? Ouch let in the poor old sun This is not my game I can not recall my name Tanka much Margie A cuppa is what I need Oh Tanka plant the B seed I know this has rhyme But I do it all the time Tanka much Margie A break for my tired old back Oh think I’ll Tanka the sack How many of these They are such a breeze Tanka much Margie Set me free release me now Oh Tanka I now know how Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ This is great! ~ SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, you are amazing! And now for the next challenge.....drum roll.....trumpet fanfare....ta dad dad daaah....just kidding! take a break... I'll be back we haven't even touched on pantoums...palindromic verse....vilannelles....sonnets....yenkas dream on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Cool write, Marsha!!! I can't wait to see what you set your hand to next Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl Girl Girl...just look at you go...challenges become you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsMarsha~ Delightful you are And much too witty by far So eager to learn With Passions flame you do burn Now you have just earned a STAR ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marsha I agree with Marge....you truly earn a Star.....wonderful done...I love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, thank you so muchly, this is me growing and stretching some more. As you can see my team of tutors, a k a slave drivers, have got me doing all sorts, and Oh my! What ‘fun’ it is. Refined torture, I swear! Why are these things so wretchedly hard love, that’s what I want to know? Anyway thank you so much, and don’t encourage them by saying you like it, they’ll make me do more! (Now I sound like Oliver Twist!) Take care, love Mushy Kethry love, you are incorigible, they all sound like a trip to the dungeon to me! Anyway love didn’t we have a deal, if I supported and clapped madly, weren’t you going to do my challenges for me? (Smug smile on my face because it looks like I can get out of work free!) Mmmm! Anyway love, you know I thank you, even if I do moan constantly! It’s my way dear heart, I wouldn’t like you to forget me love!! Ha chance would be a fine thing! I know. Speak to you soon love Take care, as always love Mushy Pepper love, for Lords sake don’t encourage them, they’ll think I enjoy it or something like that. Thank you as always love, you always manage to make me smile. Take care Mushy Margie girl, now you tell them you did this, because you know you did dear heart. A star? No you know what I really want, a chest to pin it on! Not my chest that’s big enough another chest. Thanks sweetie as always Tanka muchly Margie Love and stuff Mushy Charisma thank you so muchly as always you encourage me to fly high and strong. Thank you truly Take care, love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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