Open Poetry #12 |
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Tanka Much Margie (Margie's challenge, ) |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
Tanka Much Margie Okay I’ll try this But I know it won’t be bliss Tanka much Margie How can you do this for fun? Ouch let in the poor old sun This is not my game I can not recall my name Tanka much Margie A cuppa is what I need Oh Tanka plant the B seed I know this has rhyme But I do it all the time Tanka much Margie A break for my tired old back Oh think I’ll Tanka the sack How many of these They are such a breeze Tanka much Margie Set me free release me now Oh Tanka I now know how Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ This is great! ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, you are amazing! And now for the next challenge.....drum roll.....trumpet fanfare....ta dad dad daaah....just kidding! take a break... I'll be back we haven't even touched on pantoums...palindromic verse....vilannelles....sonnets....yenkas dream on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Cool write, Marsha!!! ![]() ![]() Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Girl Girl Girl...just look at you go...challenges become you |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsMarsha~ Delightful you are And much too witty by far So eager to learn With Passions flame you do burn Now you have just earned a ![]() ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marsha I agree with Marge....you truly earn a Star.....wonderful done...I love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, thank you so muchly, this is me growing and stretching some more. As you can see my team of tutors, a k a slave drivers, have got me doing all sorts, and Oh my! What ‘fun’ it is. Refined torture, I swear! Why are these things so wretchedly hard love, that’s what I want to know? Anyway thank you so much, and don’t encourage them by saying you like it, they’ll make me do more! (Now I sound like Oliver Twist!) Take care, love Mushy ![]() Kethry love, you are incorigible, they all sound like a trip to the dungeon to me! Anyway love didn’t we have a deal, if I supported and clapped madly, weren’t you going to do my challenges for me? (Smug smile on my face because it looks like I can get out of work free!) Mmmm! Anyway love, you know I thank you, even if I do moan constantly! It’s my way dear heart, I wouldn’t like you to forget me love!! Ha chance would be a fine thing! I know. Speak to you soon love Take care, as always love Mushy ![]() Pepper love, for Lords sake don’t encourage them, they’ll think I enjoy it or something like that. Thank you as always love, you always manage to make me smile. Take care Mushy ![]() Margie girl, now you tell them you did this, because you know you did dear heart. A star? No you know what I really want, ![]() Tanka muchly Margie Love and stuff Mushy ![]() Charisma thank you so muchly as always you encourage me to fly high and strong. Thank you truly Take care, love Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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