The Darkness Will Fade Away

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Open Poetry #12

The Darkness Will Fade Away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-01-09 11:59 AM

When Darkness
Will fade away,
Soon,
You will see a
Light In the morning,
You will smile
As a bright sun comes out ,
you will find
A heart that belongs to you,
you will see
How light brings
you glow
in your heart,
When the darkness will fade away,
you will soon learn
that the light
you wiil see
your eyes has open
to see the light again,
you will walk
that open road
And see a light
Into your eyes,
You will find
that the darkness
Has faded long ago
and light has come
Into your eyes,
When light has ened ,
And the candle has burned long ago
When you see
The darkness faded too
Along with the bruned candle...

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-09-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-01-09 12:31 PM

This is very nice

-SEA

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-01-09 04:29 PM

Vandana,
How beautiful this is, filled with the light of hope, and renewal. It just makes me happy to read it, and my thanks to you for posting such an uplifting poem!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

3 posted 2001-01-10 02:53 AM

beautiful poem, AP

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2001-01-10 06:47 AM

Vandana~
Such a tender piece so beautifully written...well done
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-01-10 01:25 PM

VANDANA, I liked how this poem flowed and the expression you have weaved into this poem just had me captivated with inspiration...
Thank you for the splendid read...

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-10-2001).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-01-11 11:10 AM

Thank you all

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-01-11 11:51 AM

A hopeful, well-penned free-verse poem

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

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