Open Poetry #12 |
Sapphires in your Eyes |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I remember the sapphires in your eyes < !signature-->when you saw me laying there waiting for you to walk into the room black lace in a candlelight affair I invited you with a French kiss yes, you were my sweet Pierre The brilliant sparkle in your eyes reflected blue topaz in mine fragrance of long stem roses and clarity of Chardonnay wine Your necklace of sweet kisses forever I will where your silhouette like a cameo engraved in depths of my heart the sapphire in your eyes like rare gems, a work of art When you bid adieu our love we had finally shared my love you took with you the band of my soul I had bared I kissed softly, sweet moist lips delicious as a Bartlett pear alone in a romantic setting like a diamond solitaire A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Wow, pretties. I like precious stones! Very beautiful poem. ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You used an excellent theme to express the loss of a dynamic lover. Well penned with great imagery, rhyme and flow~ Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Wow, This is a very sensuous writing. If I weren`t Married,Well I`d....never mind. Very Nice. Mr.Magoo |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i am speechless. *claps* love ya jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
_____________________________________________ When you bid adieu our love we had finally shared my love you took with you the band of my soul I had bared _____________________________________________ Oh Victoria, this is such a sweet write PoetFriend... I'm smiling at the exquisite expression you have penned here... Thank you for an enjoyable read *~coco~* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and these is a precious gem....wonderful penned...lovely piece. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truely beautiful words and expressions of your heart. Your poems(gems) are shining brightly these days and so are the feelings behind them. Wonderful piece you have given us once again. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you poetic enchantress..im happy you enjoyed my words.. Melissa ..it was fun writing..thanks for peeking in Mr.Magoo..ha..yes never mind haa..thanks Mr Magoo for visiting. Hi Jesse..thank you..nice of you to say Coco..thanks you very much..im happy to make you smile Charisma..thank you hon..nice to hear from you HUGS Mark..I appreciate you kind words again..thank you for reading Mark.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I just had to reply, echoing everyone else's sentiments. Very sensual and flowing poem. What wonderful imagery I wish I could come up with... Your necklace of sweet kisses forever I will where Very nice |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, you really know how to get to me these days. . . if you keep writing like this, I shall have to use gloves when I read your writing. . . so warm it is. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Victoria--I Love this. Beautifully penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you PoeticKnight..i think the name PoeticKnight is very imaginative..it was nice to hear from you today Sven..you mean take your gloves off dont you haa..thank you sven..glad you liked Thank you Poeminister..always nice to hear from you I am pleased you enjoyed.. ~V~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sweetly versed, ~V~ my love you took with you the band of my soul I had bared enjoyed very much huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have interesting romantic encounters...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you wynter and james..for peeking in....yes james very interesting haa..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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