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Ways You Taught Me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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by Bill Charles ~~~~ You taught me many things, like how to love again, and how you, as my lover, also became my very best friend… Someone to show me, the kindness of a smile, that is true with its happiness, keeping my heart alive… When I lie with you, it’s the gentleness of your touch, and your intimate passions, which I love so very much… For they hold me, in the sweetness of their embrace, as I feel the softness, of which my lips could taste… But most of all, I believe that it is your precious soul, and the caring of your gracious heart, that has made me whole… You taught me I have only one life, on this earth to live, and I pray that this life, I would to you, always give… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh yes, dear one, love is everything! Love is the greatest thing one can have, and we all can have it, nurtured deep inside our hearts. It is love that makes our lives complete. (sigh) What a sweet poem from your beautiful heart! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Mr. Charles... A teacher such as this we all wish to have in our lives. Simply lovely  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning Mistletoe Angel, You are very gracious with your words about this writing. Yes, love is everything, especially when one thinks that they have been there, and then finds out they really were not. Sure is different. Morning chanson, A'hhh yes, a teacher such as this. I do agree with you. Thanks for coming by. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sir Charles, this poem would make anyone melt. Your sentiments are beautiful, and the flow is amazing. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill "When I lie with you, it’s the gentleness of your touch,and your intimate passions, which I love so very much… For they hold me, in the sweetness of their embrace,as I feel the softness,of which my lips could taste…" Beautiful words coming right from the heart. Gives me goosebumps! Write on! Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening LoveBug, Your words are so very kind. It is special to me, and I am very glad that you liked it. Thank you for your consideration, and for coming by to read it. Evening Ariana, Indeed, from the heart the words do flow. Thank you for coming over to this humble place, and enjoying this writing I have done. |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Wow, Its not often I see this much expression put into words from a man to his wife. Im sure that she`ll treasure the love that you have opened for all to see here. I wish the two of you the best for many,many more years to come. From one man to another,or as my son would say, DUDE THIS ROCKS!! Mr.Magoo |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..what a wonderful poem...very sweet and heartfelt.. she's lucky to have you too hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning once again Mr.Magoo, I certainly appreciate you stopping by to read this writing. Your comments are very gracious, and I thank you again for coming by. IT'S ROCKIN' DUDE!! Morning dgvarner, g, I feel as if I am, the lucky one. I'm glad that you enjoyed this writing, and it did come from deep inside. Thank you for stopping at my place. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Bill, the pulse of true romance and pure love is captured in this verse you write... An endearing poem which held me in quiet sighs... I enjoyed this... *~coco~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nicely romantic , Bill. I could feel love popuring all over this.. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening CocoBaci, Nice to see you. I thank you for your comments. They are always warm and gracious. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Evening catalinamoon, Like that name, yes I do. Thank you for stopping by for a read, and I do appreciate the kind comments. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Evenin' Bill.... What a beautiful way to say how much love you have for the one in your heart! You, my friend, have done it again with this one!!  Follow your dreams... Follow your heart... Let them be your guides... ~~~ Sunny ~~~ |
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