Open Poetry #12 |
PLEASE.. (repost ..for PIXY ) :) |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i may not have much to say i may stutter on my way but listen to me listen i need for you to hear if i pause for just a moment please dont look away for even as you do i'm on my way back i'm trying to gather my thoughts that i may unravel them quickly enough before you lose interest look at me please look at me i need to be heard it may not seem important but it is to me can you hear me can you listen can you understand my heart please -dgvarner "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
OH I loved this one.. for me it is my heart crying out. I loved the emotion in this. beautifully done. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks CASSANDRA this is an oldie, but not so far from being 'today' every now and then... pixydust posted one called 'listen'..this was my response (once i found it..lol) to her hugs, g |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Seems to me you have plenty to say, Gale. The wise will listen and hear. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh but i do have plenty to say MAR! it may not always come out just right, but its up there in my head somewhere..and if ya wait just a little minute, i'll get it sifted out! lol thanks for your sweet reply MAR.. hugs, g< !signature--> "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
Gale And I bet we wrote our poems about the same person. lol But I like yours better. Thanks for hunting this down for me. Maybe one day we'll find someone that will answer and fulfill our plea. vicki |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
nope..i think different people PIX..but all the same, i thought i'd share with you that we all have the same plea at times..just to be heard glad you found it before it found its way to the back page..lol hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, very different write. a call from the heart. When did you originally write this, must have missed it. Parker |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~g~ < !signature-->i need to be heard it may not seem important but it is to me can you hear me can you listen can you understand my heart please Loved this...Many times I've said the same thing...or at least tried..They weren't always listenin'... Hugs ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh dg....how do I know these feelings, you describe it so well....thank you for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..different? ya think? (i wrote it a while back..but i posted it in the pub last oct..) i think theyre all a 'call from the heart'..in some way or another.. LL..yes..hard to get the words out when you know theyre not listening... thanks for reading! CHARISMA..i think we may have all been here at one time or another.. i thank you friend, for reading hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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