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The Beauty You Are
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The Beauty You Are |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
The Beauty You Are The sparkle of a morning dew An orange colored sky The fresh bouquet of daffodils And clouds that float on high. The brown and gold of autumn leaves Small children fast at play A sip of steaming English tea And mothers knelt to pray. The brilliance of a summer sun A freshly painted fence A book to read on rainy days And blushing innocence. A cozy couch to laze upon A present from your love Hot peanuts roasted in the shell And cooing morning doves. A simple song of sweet romance A pleasant memory A work of art to gaze upon And mist upon the sea. A bed of freshly fallen snow A touching serenade A sonnet filled with special thoughts And holiday parades. That each and every one of these Is beautiful 'tis true But none approach the unmatched grace And beauty born in you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, this is so romantic, it made me cry! Oh, your love for her shines like the heavens in here, all so pure and true! She is very lucky to share a beautiful heart such as yours! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, David! Denise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Fabulous Write.....so soft and gently as only love can describe. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fine expression of your appreciation of all the beautiful things life has to offer..and especially her...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ How refreshingly unique to see the ways in which you compare the love of the beauty in your life. I was particularly fond of this - 'A freshly painted fence' Now that I can relate to. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'A simple song of sweet romance A pleasant memory A work of art to gaze upon And mist upon the sea' This is great, David! Such beautiful things you've compared your love to. Love this! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed muchly. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, David, this is just beautiful! *sighs* The rhyme, the sentiment and the flow is perfect! You have some unique lines in this. It is my favourite poem of yours now, in fact, I'm printing out a copy! I hope she knows how lucky she is to have found you.Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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