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Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-01-10 12:46 PM

SECRETS

the mountains are still there
asking no questions
with all their dark memories

the see is green and blue
and deep and cold
and hides secrets

In the magical space
there are thousands of years
are they gone forever?

what will be?
a secret
that we hide in our soul
before we go there

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-01-10 10:15 PM

I hope I never have to hide any dark secrets
Very thought provoking
Nicely done

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-10 10:16 PM

Definately.......enjoyed this

-SEA

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-01-10 10:20 PM

I agree with both the above...well done. Think this is the first I've read of yours so-o, Welcome to Passions my friend.

jwesley

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-10 10:44 PM

Agust--I like this muchly. Wonderful write.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-11 07:33 PM

very thought provoking piece!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-01-12 03:54 PM

What will be a secret?

this one make me think.
love the thoughts.

((hugs))
Charisma

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

7 posted 2001-01-13 11:21 AM

Thank you Rex Allen McCoy and SEA and jwesley and Poeminister and Irish Rose and thank you Charisma, thank you all very much for your nice comments!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2001-02-13 12:42 PM

We all have secrets...some darker than others...this is great

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

9 posted 2001-02-13 12:54 PM

Thanks a lot Paula, I really appreciate you comment! AP

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