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Out of the Meeth of Poets [a first collaboration with Martie]
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Out of the Meeth of Poets [a first collaboration with Martie] |
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Sunshine
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Out of the Meeth of Poets if there are two poets talking and out of the mouth of one poet there should be a word we haven’t heard… we could laugh… O so heartily… for if each poet has a mouth and all mouths are speaking could that be in a bunch of meeth in which words they are a’tweaking?… ‘cause Poets make up new ways of looking at things so why not new ways of saying things that really, really mean more… I thought of a word today… quieify… now think…O I see your cap on… with the little beanie twirler twirlering… remember Seuss quieify… I can emphasize some quietude… and softly pacify… why O why could I not then quieify… then another wordling comes to mind [see I’m birthing words here] but you will chuckle at sunnily … and I know that’s not a real word ’cause my spell checker puts that little red linery under it saying “hello…WRONG” and my friend says: “I cassent write like you so sunnily for I am drearful and mostly donin but I skippedly joyed at this wonderfilled and lost my drearfullness in the laughingness” and we laugh O so heartfully but isn’t sunnily a pretty word? would you not like to have it heard as one sunnily walks on by? can’t you just see a sunnily lit room? And my friend sighs and shakes her head, and says: “So gratefilled am I for all your ponderating I readingly upped this into my formattingness and now I’m hookered to your idiocyritnutiness and you are sunnily in my dictionariall” noddingly I, hailing her cry “she’s got it, she’s got it, better than I!” so know, that I like ponderating too… that pulls in a lot… a little darker I suppose as I ponderates all I got… now and then I do a little stompenplating but then, most of us do…we just don’t know what to call it…. but then again…we do… ‘course everyone knows we can discombobulate a word so very cleaveringly and before we know it, it is dictionaryized… 01.19.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is one of the best poems I have ever read!! So very clever! I just love this......into my library with a Whoosh!  -SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm ponderating the laughingness of this... and loving every line!!! Well done! |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
smilified by these bendable cotton words, so embiggend with laughiness and begrace, dear 'shine! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
did you ever try to type when you were laughing so hard your fingers were shookified? This is so filloflowing with the joy of poetry i think you two mustr me joined at the hip (siamesified?) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
VERY Ogden Nash.... LOL... nice job, ladies! had me giggling Here's a little taste of Ogden- "Once there was an elephant Who tried to use the telephant. No, no! I mean an elephone Who tried to use the telephone! Dear me! I am not certain quite That even now I've got it right!" hehe.... you're in good company... he's always been a fave of mine... a top word coiner... this poem by you two gets a BRAVO! from me!  you want to be a writer, don't know how or when, find a quiet place, use a humble pen-paul simon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
‘cause Poets make up new ways of looking at things so why not new ways of saying things that really, really mean more… I thought of a word today… quieify… now think…O I see your cap on… with the little beanie twirler twirlering… remember Seuss quieify… I can emphasize some quietude… and softly pacify… why O why could I not then quieify… then another wordling comes to mind [see I’m birthing words here] but you will chuckle at sunnily … and I know that’s not a real word ’cause my spell checker puts that little red linery under it saying “hello…WRONG” and my friend says: “I cassent write like you so sunnily for I am drearful and mostly donin but I skippedly joyed at this wonderfilled and lost my drearfullness in the laughingness” ==================== may I applausify you .. while I worshipify this collaboration and YOU KNOW OF COURSE ... this is very coolify and qualifies as a groovify *winkifywinkify* Im digging you two as a duetify ... oncorify please  love this you two,very creative conception later gatorfiys me When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I've read this four times now and it truly is utterly divine. A duet played perfectly dear heart. Absolutely fabulous love it really is. Into my library with you amazing duo. Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--this was funistic...Sunshine did all the thinking...and I just laughed...I like that...and we are preparing for another, huhmmm, more serious piece....ouch..forgot this is mostuffseriosa already. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Methinks Martie protestates too much...she indeed added the jocularity without which this would not have becoming realing...LOL...but we ARE seriously going to write one without so much levity....um...or are we?...thank you ALL for the cleavering comments...enjoyeding so muchly! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KariMarSunTieLeaShine~ This is such fun ! Heaven's above ... such giggles n' fun ! You take an idea ... and really run ! Grinning at you both ... I am !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is just splendiferous... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wondermendously talent showingly displayered in this piece you two. Thanks for the laugh. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read this to my granddaughter last night...the giggles were delightingful... |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I'm just smiling, smiling, smiling! Loved this you two! What a wonderful colaboration! May I have some more please?!? Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
When you two set out to concertify you do it with such stylization. Keth |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, we're going to work on a "ahem" seriousnessly one...but then again...maybe not... Keth...you've got the groove baby!....LOL... thanks you two, for coming in! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
um. . . yeah, I like this one!!! ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I read this to my husband last night, and he giggled.  |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, you had to give it a thinkling first?...LOL... Martie, of COURSING he did.... |
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